麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂 As we all konw,the colleges have open theirs do

麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂 As we all konw,the colleges have open theirs do
麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误
本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂
As we all konw,the colleges have open theirs doors wider,this is a good thing,it makes more chances for people to study in college and recieve better education.
But at the same time,the colleges' opening their doors wider bring something bad also.Nowadays,enter a college is more and more easily than before,it means there is more and more college student in the society,being a college student is not means deriving a job.As the quality of college student rising so fastly,more and more college student can not get a job.
In my opinion,it's no doubt that colleges' opening their doors wider is good for development of society,but people who get a chance of studing in college should work hard to improve his ablity so that he can get a job.

麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误本人最烂的就是英语作文,每次得分都很低,希望大家指出鄙人以下文章的错误,指出并修正就好,敬请不要辱骂 As we all konw,the colleges have open theirs do
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(改后)As we all know,the colleges have widely opened their doors.It is a good thing,because there is more chances for young people to get in college,receiving better education.

路过， LZ要加油啊！ 我改天有时间了帮你全部改过来， 现在认真上班ING！

bring --brings
enter--entering
it--which
there is --there are
college stu--college students
is not means --does not mean
college student --college students
so fastly--...

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bring --brings
enter--entering
it--which
there is --there are
college stu--college students
is not means --does not mean
college student --college students
so fastly--so 删掉 fast
额```很多句子的说话都不正确,就是读起来非常拗口.只是把有语法错误的地方整理出来了

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As we all konw, the colleges have open their doors wider.This is a good thing.It creates more opportunities for people to study in a college and recieve better education.
However, at the same tim...

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As we all konw, the colleges have open their doors wider.This is a good thing.It creates more opportunities for people to study in a college and recieve better education.
However, at the same time,opening their doors wider would bring something bad as well. Nowadays,entering a college is more and more easy than before.It means there is more and more college student in the society,being a college student does not equals to securing a job. As the quality of college student decreases so quickly, more and more college student cannot get a job.
In my opinion, it's no doubt that colleges accepting more students can be good for the development of society, but people who get a chance to study in college should work hard to improve his ability so that he can get a job.
Comment: quite a well written piece for a Chinese citizen, continue to work hard! I have corrected most of your errors. Your main error is that you don't end your sentence correctly. you often puts a coma althought the sentence is already complete. Hope this will enlighten you. Good luck!

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