麻烦高手检查一下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误语法错误,语言不连贯,表达不地道的地方希望高手们找的越多越好.Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in fro

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麻烦高手检查一下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误语法错误,语言不连贯,表达不地道的地方希望高手们找的越多越好.Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in fro
麻烦高手检查一下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误
语法错误,语言不连贯,表达不地道的地方希望高手们找的越多越好.
Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in front of you to introduce myself.I’m now studying in Grade3 in No.1 middle school of my hometown and my senior high period will be accomplished soon in this summer.
About my character,I can’t describe it well,but generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the things I am interested in.and I am optimistic and confident.Sometimes i prefer to stay alone,reading,listening to music,but i am not lonely,In my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller-skating.I even got the 4th prize in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which is a very glorious memmory.But now since I’m faced with National College Entrance Examination,I can’t spend too much time doing sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to balance between study and entertainment.Also I love English very much.I often write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough,I still need to make an effort.
This is a brief introduction of myself.At last I really look forward to being admitted and becoming part of the NUS team.Thank you very much.

麻烦高手检查一下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误语法错误,语言不连贯,表达不地道的地方希望高手们找的越多越好.Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in fro
Good morning,(改成ladies and gentlemen),I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here (删in front of you去,重复) to introduce myself.I’m now studying in Grade3 in No.1 （middle?senior吧） school of my hometown and my senior high period will be accomplished soon in this summer.
Talking about my character,（删I can’t describe it well,but generally speaking 去,外国人不接受这种说法)I am diligent,open ,optimistic and confident.I work hard especially (when) doing the things I am interested in.Sometimes I prefer to stay alone,reading,listening to music,but i am not (lonely最好换成bookish书呆子气的),In my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller-skating.I even got the 4th prize in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which is a very glorious memmory.But now since I’m faced with National College Entrance Examination,I have to spend less time on sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to balance the study and entertainment.Also I love English very much.I often write compositions to improve my written ability .but my english is not good enough,I still need to make an effort.
This is a brief introduction of myself.At last I am really looking forward to being admitted and becoming part of the NUS team.Thank you very much.
总的来说,文章思路清晰（最好分几断）,也看得出来运用了不少词汇来彰显文采（这两点,高考作文要保持下去）,但好像句式比较单一,I 用的太多了.还有Chinglish也有不少.建议你多看看别人的文章,做阅读的时候留意一下,尽量多模仿.
愿君高考顺利!

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Good morning ladies and gentlemen,I’m Jiang Lin from Shandong Province.It's my pleasure to be here in front of you to introduce myself.I’m now studying in Grade 3 in No.1 middle school of my hometown and I'll finish my study here this summer.
About my character, I can’t describe it well, but generally speaking ,I am a hard_working student especially when I do the things I am interested in. And I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but I am not lonely, In my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller_skating. I even got the 4th place in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which was a very glorious memory.But now since I’m faced with National College Entrance Examination,I can’t spend too much time doing sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to balance between study and entertainment.Also I love English very much.I often write compositions to improve my witten ability, but I know my english is not good enough,I still need to make an effort.
This is a brief introduction of myself.At last I really look forward to being admitted and becoming part of the NUS team. Thank you very much.
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Good morning sir and madam,I’m Jianglin from Shandong Provins.It’s my pleasure to be here in front of you to introduce myself.I’m Grade3, studying in No.1 middle school in my hometown and i will finish with my high school soon by the coming summer.
About my character, I can’t describe it well, but generally speaking ,i am a hard-working student, especially when i do the things I am interested in. I am also optimistic and confident. Sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, in my spare time,I often go shopping with my friends,surf on the Internet and do some sports,such as running,table tennis and roller-skating. I even won the 4th prize in the 1500-meter race in my school sports meeting,which is a very glorious memmory.But now since I’m faced with the National College Entrance Examination,I can’t spend too much time on sports.But this busy life has also taught me how to find a balance between study and entertainment.Also I love English very much.I like to write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough,I still need to work even harder.
This is a brief introduction of myself.At last Im really looking forward to being accepted and to becoming a part of the NUS team. Thank you very much.

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Good-morning and Mr. lady, I am the Jianglin which comes from Provins in Shandong.I am very happy at you before introduce myself here.I now just in the number of Grade3 the studies are very quick here in summer, my home town with my experienced high period of 1 inside learn will be finished.
The character concerning me, I can't describe very good, but generally speaking, the i is particularly a work student of pain to work a thing me interested in. And I am optimistic and self-confident. Sometimes the i is partial to stop over solely, reading, listenning to musi
早安和女士先生,我是来自山东 Provins 的 Jianglin.我很高兴在你之前在这里介绍我自己.我现在正在号码的 Grade3 学习在这夏天很快，我的家乡和我的资深的高时期的 1个中学将会是完成的。
有关我的个性，我不能描述得很好, 但是一般来说， i 尤其是一位辛苦的工作学生做事物我感兴趣。而且我是乐观而自信的。有时 i 偏爱独自地停留,读,听 musi
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