求英语作文改错,As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want.Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can have our own digita

求英语作文改错,As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want.Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can have our own digita
求英语作文改错,
As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want.
Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments are usually harm to people`s eye.Some people may stay one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet in our life.So ,we need have good habits to relax ourself.

求英语作文改错,As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere which we want.Many people own their equipments for their are convenience.We can have our own digita
As we all know,digital equipments are more and more important in our life.We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere(everywhere - every place) which we want.
Many people own their equipments for their are(are去掉) convenience.We can have our own digital camera to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books in our learning.for example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card（加上so） that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments are usually harm (harm - harmful)to people`s eye(eye - eyes).Some people may stay(加上at) one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet（all kinds of these things放在这） in our life.So ,we need have good habits to relax ourself(ourself - ourselves).

We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere that we want.
Many people own their equipments for their are convenient.
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Digital equipments are getting more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere.
Many people own their equipments for their convenience. We can have ou...

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Digital equipments are getting more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products in everywhere.
Many people own their equipments for their convenience. We can have our own digital camera to record our happy moment in our daily life. We can also read the digital books in our learning. For example, we don`t need to carry a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card. We can then read more books when we want. We can use computer in our working day too.It is fast for workers to exchange their information and to send information to a far place.
However, there are still some problems exist for us to take note. Such as, long looking at a digital screen is usually harmful to people`s eye. Some people may over indulgence that they stay at one place for a long time without movement or care to relax. All kinds of these addiction, can be seen in our life. Therefore, we need to have good habits to relax ourself.

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As we all know that digital equipments are more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products which we want everywhere. Their equipments for are convenient.We use our own d...

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As we all know that digital equipments are more and more important in our life. We can use all kinds of digital products which we want everywhere. Their equipments for are convenient.We use our own digital cameras to record our happiness in our daily life.We can also use digital books for learning.For example,we don`t need to take a lot of books but can store some virtual books in our memory card that we can read more books which we want.We can use computer in our working day,too.It`s fast for workers to change their information in a short time and a far place.
But,there still exist some problems for us to do.Such as,digital equipments usually do harm to people`s eyes.Some people may stay one place for a long time.All kinds of these things we can meet in our life.So ,we should have good habits to relax ourself.
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