高三英语改错,急Li Hua is an excellent students.She lives near her school.One night,the wind was blowing the window very strongly that the noise woke him up.She knew heavy rain would soon arrive.Think of her classroom,she got up and rushed out

高三英语改错,急Li Hua is an excellent students.She lives near her school.One night,the wind was blowing the window very strongly that the noise woke him up.She knew heavy rain would soon arrive.Think of her classroom,she got up and rushed out
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Li Hua is an excellent students.She lives near her school.One night,the wind was blowing the window very strongly that the noise woke him up.She knew heavy rain would soon arrive.Think of her classroom,she got up and rushed out into the dark.The strong wind made difficult of her to go forward quickly.In spite of this,she got to her classroom and open the door.All the windows were open,and the strong wind was filled the classroom with great noise.Quickly she shut up all the windows.Just then it began to rain heavy.When she got home,it was already three

高三英语改错,急Li Hua is an excellent students.She lives near her school.One night,the wind was blowing the window very strongly that the noise woke him up.She knew heavy rain would soon arrive.Think of her classroom,she got up and rushed out
1students改为student 2 very改为so 2him 改为her 2knew后加that
2Think改为Thinking 3 made后加it 3 of改为for 4forward 改为forwards
4open改为opened 5open改为opened 6heavy改为heavily
错得还真多啊,数字代表的是那处错误所在行数、、

Li Hua is an excellent student.She lives near her school.One night,the wind blew the window very strong that the noise woke her up.She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.Thinking of her classroom,sh...

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Li Hua is an excellent student.She lives near her school.One night,the wind blew the window very strong that the noise woke her up.She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.Thinking of her classroom,she dressed up and rushed out into the darkness.The strong wind made it difficult to go forward quickly.regardless of this difficultes,she got to her classroom and opened the door.All the windows were opened and the strong wind was filled the classroom with great noise.Quickly she shut up all the windows.Just then it began to rain heavyly.When she got home,it was already three.

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students去掉s
very改为so
him改为her
Think改为thinking
made difficult of 改为made difficulty for
open加ed
heavy改为heavily

5行open不改为opened，因为open 本身就是形容词
5行的wind后的was 去掉