检查一下下面英文是否正确如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由）,注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thank

检查一下下面英文是否正确如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由）,注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thank
检查一下下面英文是否正确
如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由）,注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thanks）(最后会给分的!）
I really happy we are friends now.You are so friendly,make me so happy!And I hope you can feel me friendly to you,too.You are my only friend in America.So I am bound to treasure our friendship.I thing my English so bad,but I through you,my English is better now.Thank you very!Are you okey in America?And your family.I have a wish,namely we can meet!Look forward!It's Spring Festival in china now.We are all very happy.Do you know about Spring Festival?Let me tell you.The Spring Festival is Chinese tradition festival.In street,everywhere are hang red lanterns.All people will have a "familly reunion dinner".They make many delicious food,dumplings for this "family reunion dinner".All children can get some red paper packet containing money as a gift.So they are very happy .This is Spring Festival.Do you like?I love rock.And my best singer is Avril Lavigne.I think she is so cool.And her voice is very special.Do you like her?What't your favorite super star?On weekend,I learn the guitar.But music just my hobby.My dream is study abroad.Then go to the USA.So,I will make efforts!What's your dream?I want to know more about you.Last,I hope you and your family happy every day!

检查一下下面英文是否正确如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由）,注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thank
第二句make前加and语气更顺.第三句me改my.So I am bound to treasure our friendship是不是你打错了,I thing my English so bad改为I think my English is so poor.but I through you,改为with your help.Thank you very加much.okey改为ok.And your family?Look forward加to it.Do you know something about Spring Festival?tradition改traditional.In the street.hang改hanging.dumplings去掉.This is the Spring Festival.Do you likeit?love 改like.best favorite singer .very cool.What's.But music is just my hobby.What's your dream改为what about your dream?是高一的学生,Look forward,tradition,efforts!这些事高一的词汇,高一的学生容易乱用新词.

I thing my English so bad
这句话thing拼错了 应该是think 而且这里bad这个词用得不好。。可以换成poor什么的
我也没太仔细看。。感觉写的有些幼稚，完全是汉语意思的直译。。。应该是个十二三的孩子写的吧。。。建议多读一些英文的文章来增加语感 不过能独立写出这么长的文章还是十分值得鼓励还赞赏的 ^_^...

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I thing my English so bad
这句话thing拼错了 应该是think 而且这里bad这个词用得不好。。可以换成poor什么的
我也没太仔细看。。感觉写的有些幼稚，完全是汉语意思的直译。。。应该是个十二三的孩子写的吧。。。建议多读一些英文的文章来增加语感 不过能独立写出这么长的文章还是十分值得鼓励还赞赏的 ^_^

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I really happy we are friends now.这第一句好象就有错
应该是 I really happy that we are friends now